Angel: Created page with "Adam is at work, checking something on the computer. Revealed that he's a police detective, but rank isn't mentioned. He sees a pattern in some reports that – to him –..."

2019-11-03T11:45:21Z

Created page with "Adam is at work, checking something on the computer. Revealed that he's a police detective, but rank isn't mentioned. He sees a pattern in some reports that – to him –..."

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[[Adam]] is at work, checking something on the computer. Revealed that he's a police detective, but rank isn't mentioned. He sees a pattern in some reports that – to him – indicates [[drinker]] activity, and makes a mental note before returning to analysing a string of thefts that he's officially supposed to be working on.

When he gets a break, Adam sends a text message to [[Lucas]], assuming that if it needs dealing with urgently, Lucas and [[Stef]] could deal with the case. He has an urge to go out and do something, but knows that he can better fight the [[unnatural]]s by keeping his job, so they have access to police systems.

Includes a bit of a refresher on unnaturals, drinkers (and why they're not vampires), and the [[New Inquisition]].

Adam is too introspective here; it doesn't suit him. And the whole scene reads like a block of exposition. I think this needs replacing with something else.

Summary:Hunter's War/Chapter 1/Scene 2 - Revision history

Angel: Created page with "Adam is at work, checking something on the computer. Revealed that he's a police detective, but rank isn't mentioned. He sees a pattern in some reports that – to him –..."